Please comment on this poem about merry

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A two lip for a three lip

I would like to dedicate this poem to my most beloved guinea pig, Merry.

Beneath a lonely willow,
Lies a guinea pig.
Upon a silver pillow,
Around it scattered twig.
The moonlight it doth shineth,
Upon his noble back.
This perfect little guinea,
But something he doth lack.

His round eyes stareth,
Beyond the moon and stars.
This guinea pig doth glareth,
Longingly at mars.
He waits upon his love,
Who doth cometh from afar.
Upon his upper lip,
Are traces of a scar.

Liam Dienemann
 
Re: Please comment on this poem about merry - it means alot to me!

Have removed the double post now.

Lovely poem.
 
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aww that's a really beautiful poem..... you're very talented :)

Trace x
 
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this is what i mean about his lips!
 
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Hey that's great, well done you should write more poetry :)
 
Re: Please comment on this poem about merry - it means alot to me!

Beautiful poem! If Merry understands it (which he may or may not) then I'm sure he's very pleased.

Kimmie
 
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KimmiesGuineas said:
Beautiful poem! If Merry understands it (which he may or may not) then I'm sure he's very pleased.

Kimmie
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of course he does! he's not some kind of rodent! is he?
 
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Squeeky-pig said:
of course he does! he's not some kind of rodent! is he?
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Actually guinea pigs are classed as them, so yes ;)
 
kellyandpiggies said:
Squeeky-pig said:
of course he does! he's not some kind of rodent! is he?
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Actually guinea pigs are classed as them, so yes ;)
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You're right, guinea pigs are rodents. And, actually, what does that have to do with it? Rodents understand things too.

Kimmie
 
well, he reacts positively to my poetry! i am sure he understands the emotion more than the words ;)
 
kellyandpiggies said:
Sure, But I agree with Kimmie, what does being a rodent have to do with it?
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perhaps less space inside skull to fit brain? (they have big souls which is mch more important)
 
Squeeky-pig said:
kellyandpiggies said:
Sure, But I agree with Kimmie, what does being a rodent have to do with it?
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perhaps less space inside skull to fit brain? (they have big souls which is mch more important)
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Now you're just being daft
 
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