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lilgalnatalie
First of all, I'm writing a new story, about how two best friends help each other out.
So please comment on if you like it, so i know i aint doing wrong. And it is good or not.
Chapter 1
"Oh come on you know I'm right!" Faye exclamied, watching her stick race mine in the stream below.
She got to her feet, held out her mood engrossed hand and smiled. "Come on, let's go to the playarea."
"Faye were not 4 years old anymore and besides, I dont like them chav boys who hang around on the swings,
they're always checking out my arse."
"Oh get over it Lisa." She said rolling her eyes. "The only lad checking you out is Mr Harold."
"Watch it Faye!" I warned with a grin, then with all my strength splashed her and ran.
She followed after with a scream and repeated encore of "l'm going to get you for that."
We dashed along the forest, were tree's blocked the sky from seeing the bare ground beneath it's leaves.
The wooden bridges that screehed in pain as we crossed them. Then to the open pathway of gravel.
I seen Faye behind me, closing in on her target, so i exited into a muddy zone, once again harboured
by trees concealing us.
There was once again a tiny stream following into the muddy lake, though it looked shallow,
under the layer of mud was hidden depth. And once locked inside the mud you will never see
the surface again, never.
Faye was by the entrance - spotted. So i shuffled gently towards were the lake narrowed, and made a
leap, i felt a greatness flush through me as a soured through the air, then a relief i made it as gravity pulled me
down, and my feet touched the ground.
I laughed at Faye until my sides split.
"Wooh, i rule!" I cheered. Then Faye, backed up, ran forward and made a giant leap over the lake.
But gravity turned on her, Faye was souring straight into the lake, she screamed in terror, i tried to reach out, but
only ended up being showered in muddy lake water, it ran around me, turning my blood cold.
But this was not only that, but Faye sunk into the muddy water. And with such force had no chance to take
one last look at the world before being submerged into the mud....
So please comment on if you like it, so i know i aint doing wrong. And it is good or not.
Chapter 1
"Oh come on you know I'm right!" Faye exclamied, watching her stick race mine in the stream below.
She got to her feet, held out her mood engrossed hand and smiled. "Come on, let's go to the playarea."
"Faye were not 4 years old anymore and besides, I dont like them chav boys who hang around on the swings,
they're always checking out my arse."
"Oh get over it Lisa." She said rolling her eyes. "The only lad checking you out is Mr Harold."
"Watch it Faye!" I warned with a grin, then with all my strength splashed her and ran.
She followed after with a scream and repeated encore of "l'm going to get you for that."
We dashed along the forest, were tree's blocked the sky from seeing the bare ground beneath it's leaves.
The wooden bridges that screehed in pain as we crossed them. Then to the open pathway of gravel.
I seen Faye behind me, closing in on her target, so i exited into a muddy zone, once again harboured
by trees concealing us.
There was once again a tiny stream following into the muddy lake, though it looked shallow,
under the layer of mud was hidden depth. And once locked inside the mud you will never see
the surface again, never.
Faye was by the entrance - spotted. So i shuffled gently towards were the lake narrowed, and made a
leap, i felt a greatness flush through me as a soured through the air, then a relief i made it as gravity pulled me
down, and my feet touched the ground.
I laughed at Faye until my sides split.
"Wooh, i rule!" I cheered. Then Faye, backed up, ran forward and made a giant leap over the lake.
But gravity turned on her, Faye was souring straight into the lake, she screamed in terror, i tried to reach out, but
only ended up being showered in muddy lake water, it ran around me, turning my blood cold.
But this was not only that, but Faye sunk into the muddy water. And with such force had no chance to take
one last look at the world before being submerged into the mud....